一、作文题目概述
2012年6月的英语四级作文题目为“A Letter to the University President about the Canteen Food”,要求考生写一封给大学校长的信,表达对食堂食物质量的关注和建议。这道题目贴近学生生活,考查了考生对日常生活场景的描述和表达观点的能力。
二、作文结构分析
1. 开头:引出写信的目的,即表达对食堂食物质量的关注。
2. 主体:具体描述食堂食物存在的问题,并提出自己的建议。
3. 结尾:总结全文,再次强调对食堂食物质量的关注,并表达对校长的期望。
三、作文写作要点
1. 称呼:在信的开头,使用恰当的称呼,如“Dear President”或“Respected President”。
2. 问候:表达对校长的问候,如“Hello/Hi, Professor/Sir/Madam”。
3. 引言:简要说明写信的原因,如“I am writing to you to express my concerns about the canteen food in our university”。
4. 具体描述:详细描述食堂食物存在的问题,如卫生状况、口味、价格等。
5. 建议:针对问题提出自己的建议,如改善卫生条件、提高菜品质量、增加菜品种类等。
6. 结尾:总结全文,再次强调对食堂食物质量的关注,并表达对校长的期望,如“I sincerely hope that you will take this matter into consideration and make necessary improvements to the canteen food”。
四、作文范文
Dear President,
Hello, Professor/Sir/Madam. I am writing to you to express my concerns about the canteen food in our university.
As a student, I am very concerned about the quality of the food we eat in the canteen. Recently, I have noticed some problems with the food, such as poor hygiene, limited variety, and high prices. For example, the dishes are often not properly cleaned, and sometimes there are even flies around. Moreover, the taste of the food is not always satisfying, and the prices are quite high compared to the quality.
To improve the situation, I would like to suggest the following measures: Firstly, the university should establish stricter hygiene standards for the canteen staff and ensure that the food is always clean and safe. Secondly, the canteen should offer a wider variety of dishes to cater to the different tastes of students. Finally, the prices of the food should be adjusted to be more reasonable.
I sincerely hope that you will take this matter into consideration and make necessary improvements to the canteen food. As a student, I believe that a good canteen is essential for our healthy growth and study.
Thank you for your attention to this issue.
Yours sincerely,
[Your Name]
五、作文注意事项
1. 注意信件的格式,包括称呼、正文和结束语。
2. 语言表达要清晰、简洁,避免使用过于复杂的句子。
3. 注意书信的礼貌用语,如问候、感谢等。
4. 在描述问题时,要具体、客观,避免主观臆断。
5. 提出建议时,要具有可操作性,以便校长能够采纳。
6. 注意作文的字数要求,控制在120-180词之间。
